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''You fall down to the floor, completely black. ''

please don't judge my writing skills, PLEASE.

''You see, yourself, sitting on the couch, what? ''A woman sat down next to you, leaning down to your chest. "Oh Dom, what would we do dear, I afraid we in danger. All my relatives has left the country in their hurry. Why shouldn't we?"

"They are just overreacting honey, nothing will goes wrong. The Everglades argeement brings down all the nukes and bombs, I'm sure what people said about Russia's is just a big lies. Besides, we have to take care for our daughter too. She's too young."

"Maybe you're right... but I don't know."

Unrealname123 (talk) 13:18, June 25, 2017 (UTC)Spongebob narrator's voiceUnrealname123 (talk) 13:18, June 25, 2017 (UTC) 3 months later


 * Sad airhorn music*

You see yourself in a cemetery. Only you with the gravedigger and the band, because all your relatives has flee.It's looking like late day and raining. Somehow, you take your pistol and fires a few shots to the air.

1 months later...

"Dad, wheres mommy?"

"Oh sweetheart, mommy has to go."

"But to where dad?"

"Grandpa and grandma needs her to do the housework."

"But why? I want my mom dad." The little voice start bursting in tears.

"OPEN IN THE NAME OF FREEDOM" said another voice.

"Oh no"


 * You push your daughter down to the basement, while she try to hold her tears. When all settled, you push a closet to blocked the front door, while yourself with your trusty Sig Sauer guard the back door. However, an Abram fires a shell and completely demolished your front room.  Several black suited troops went in, you quickly shot dead on and injured a few more. As they start firing their rifles, you quickly slids behind the TV for covers. Another man walk in, you could see him by the reflexed of the mirror. He dress in gray, but still with a black. He look way higher than others, and have some medals. He shout something then the whole group retreat. Just as the moment you think the coast was clear, they throw in sleeping gas. After 3 minutes, you can't take holding your breath anymore, so you rushed through the back. More then a dozen troops was waiting there for you.

Your body collapse. The last sounds you hear was... Crying and Gunshot...

''Blam. You're in teh room again. Not crazy. And these rekall sures to give much heck of a headache.''